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| | From:  Merlin--_--_ (Original Message) | Sent: 12/2/2008 11:33 PM |
She She is the sum of all frustrations
And the source of all delights.
Some days the bane of all that’s male
And fire in the blood in the nights.
She is the final contradiction
And the sum of all life’s keys.
She is the rock to which to hold
And the symbol of all mysteries. She understands within her core
what I can only grasp to know.
Yet cannot see, nor understand,
That to I such things are not on show.
Perhaps, sometimes, I think I sense
She loves, but despairs my innocence �?BR>That I should struggle to infer
What by nature is a part of Her. She is the sum of all frustrations
And the source of all delights.
She is the Endless Knot given form,
And more than that, besides�?/EM> Merlin 02/12/08
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 12/3/2008 12:05 AM |
Aahhh...She sounds all and more any man could wish for, Gordon, the best of both worlds, a worthy entry and gorgeous tribute, Zy |
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You did it Gordon, see what I mean about thinking cap...??? All kidding aside, you did excellent...keep thinking that way and you're on solid ground. Mariaxx |
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Thank you again, Ladies. This was written more on the feminine as a whole, rather than a particular, Zy. But, my own particular inspiration does fall into this. And... Yes, she is rather.  Maria Your thinking cap was splendid I'm grateful you did lend it But, Solid ground? With Females around? I'm not that daft...  Gordon |
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haha Gordon, you know all about these things...good for you... Mariaxx |
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| Ah right,Gordon! Now I know what my wife means when she tells me to : Get Knotted! |
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Lovely poem, Gordon .....and so intuitive But ....I bet you still get it wrong LOL However ....I think you boys should be learning something from this challenge, except Philip...he obviously knows it all already xx |
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Maybe she just doesn't like your tie, Phillip! Thank you, Jen. And yes... ALL the time...!  The rules aren't that hard to learn - it's just that they keep getting changed! And I bet he has lots of bruises. Gordon |
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Gordon, are you speaking about the cracked ribs, or knots on his arms... Mariaxx |
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Oh, she didn't 'arm him that much, Maria. Knot really. (groan)  |
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