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New Poetry Pge 6 : Talking to My Self
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(1 recommendation so far) Message 1 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 11/2/2007 3:27 AM
 
 
Hey, me over there
who... me?
 
Yeah, what's your game
 
what's your name?
 
 
I'm you don't you know
Who...me?
 
I just came out
to shake off the dust
mosey about
and polish the rust.
 
 
Then get back in!
Who me?
 
I'm fine as I am thanks
don't need no 'self' blanks
 
So sad that you think so
don't push to the brink so
 
Smell the roses, Self, and
psyche's contemplations
close on the covert, and
enjoy life's jubilations.
 
 
Anyone there.....?
 
 
 
 
Don't ask...lol...an odd one, I know already,  just fooling around.


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 Message 2 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 11/2/2007 10:35 AM
this was way cool Zy...........like the flow. Can relate to the movement of that zig zag thinking lol Great pen hun
 
Cara
 

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 Message 3 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 11/2/2007 10:39 AM
i wonder who is there
 
i think i know
 
it is self seeking self - yet again
 
most well done Zy

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(1 recommendation so far) Message 4 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 11/2/2007 11:02 AM
I talk to myself all the time, it helps ... cute verse Zy, I enjoyed reading it.
 
Maria

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 Message 5 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/2/2007 3:41 PM
Hiya, Cara, it is a little unusual in style for me, lol, but a moment of being totally unhindered by format...and thought.
 
Another quite late night doodle, lol, but it made sense to me, glad it did to you too, thanks, Zy
 
 

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 Message 6 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/2/2007 3:43 PM
Aaahhh, Mikhail, you know me well, My Friend, a mood piece which opens the door wider to mois, lol.
 
Just fooling around with both thoughts and format, a bit of an experiment, Zy

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 Message 7 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/2/2007 3:49 PM
Hy, there is a difference between 'myself' and my 'self', Dix, sometimes it is necessary to separate the two....this was one of those moments.
 
I often let out exclamations etc, but these are little silent chats, my balancing act, thanks, Zy

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 11/2/2007 7:04 PM
I was just wondering what you had wrapped in that Zig Zag paper, Zy.  You ain't been in the Doobie again have you?... lol,   bear
 

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 Message 9 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameForgottenMelody4Sent: 11/2/2007 9:43 PM
Dear Zy,

I had such fun reaching this out loud. A fabulous verse.

Melody x

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(1 recommendation so far) Message 10 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2007 12:05 AM
I'm not saying till you tell me what or where 'a Doobie' is, bear, lol

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2007 12:06 AM
Hy, Melody, it was just an experiment, especially in it's layout....
 
 so I'm pleased it worked for you, thanks, Zy

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 Message 12 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 11/3/2007 3:13 AM
Hi Zy,
 
Sometimes, the most unusual poems can work very well. I think that this is one of those poems.
 
 
Poetess
xx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/4/2007 3:04 AM
Thanks, Poetess, I sometimes cannot sleep and just play around with format and words...
 
the content of this one was what inspired me to try this out, glad you liked, Zy

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