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| From: Zydha (Original Message) | Sent: 11/2/2007 3:27 AM |
Hey, me over there who... me? Yeah, what's your game what's your name? I'm you don't you know Who...me? I just came out to shake off the dust mosey about and polish the rust. Then get back in! Who me? I'm fine as I am thanks don't need no 'self' blanks So sad that you think so don't push to the brink so Smell the roses, Self, and psyche's contemplations close on the covert, and enjoy life's jubilations. Anyone there.....? Don't ask...lol...an odd one, I know already, just fooling around. |
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this was way cool Zy...........like the flow. Can relate to the movement of that zig zag thinking lol Great pen hun Cara |
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i wonder who is there i think i know it is self seeking self - yet again most well done Zy |
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I talk to myself all the time, it helps ... cute verse Zy, I enjoyed reading it. Maria |
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| | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/2/2007 3:41 PM |
Hiya, Cara, it is a little unusual in style for me, lol, but a moment of being totally unhindered by format...and thought. Another quite late night doodle, lol, but it made sense to me, glad it did to you too, thanks, Zy |
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| | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/2/2007 3:43 PM |
Aaahhh, Mikhail, you know me well, My Friend, a mood piece which opens the door wider to mois, lol. Just fooling around with both thoughts and format, a bit of an experiment, Zy |
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| | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/2/2007 3:49 PM |
Hy, there is a difference between 'myself' and my 'self', Dix, sometimes it is necessary to separate the two....this was one of those moments. I often let out exclamations etc, but these are little silent chats, my balancing act, thanks, Zy |
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I was just wondering what you had wrapped in that Zig Zag paper, Zy. You ain't been in the Doobie again have you?... lol, bear |
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Dear Zy,
I had such fun reaching this out loud. A fabulous verse.
Melody x |
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| | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/3/2007 12:06 AM |
Hy, Melody, it was just an experiment, especially in it's layout.... so I'm pleased it worked for you, thanks, Zy |
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Hi Zy, Sometimes, the most unusual poems can work very well. I think that this is one of those poems. Poetess xx |
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| | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/4/2007 3:04 AM |
Thanks, Poetess, I sometimes cannot sleep and just play around with format and words... the content of this one was what inspired me to try this out, glad you liked, Zy |
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