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New Poetry Pge 8 : Summers Love (my autumnal poem)
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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8  (Original Message)Sent: 10/6/2008 4:51 PM
Your imminent arrival
effects me so.
Oh my Lady,
I am impatient to see once again
auburn hair the fire of your eyes.
In rapture I would die for your touch
the feel of your lips upon mine.
Eyes lower as you pass by.


Within your embrace small things pause.
In crimson and ochre
the land echoes your sweet laugh
paints itself with colours majestic.
My wonderful woman,
poets pen...artists brush
musicians find inspiration
all for you.


As you seduce the days
they willingly bend.
Become confused undecided
whether to smile or weep.
And in their confusion
a glimpse of your sister
arranging her bridal veil,
Soon to cover the ground.






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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 10/6/2008 5:47 PM
A very romantic view of the seasons, nicely done
Jen x

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 10/6/2008 8:18 PM
Most expressive...one spoken with love.
 
Mariaxx

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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 10/7/2008 2:58 PM
Stellar..... a very metaphoric interpretation.... gorgeous indeed .. from
                                    jj

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/8/2008 8:30 AM
Gorgeous!

Emma x

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From: MSN Nicknamestellar411Sent: 10/8/2008 2:30 PM
 
 
I read this one yesterday and thought I'd already commented.. but today these words really suit my mood. the morning is wet ~ fall colours look so rich in the rain.
 
delightfully sensual
 
StellaR

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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 10/9/2008 1:02 AM
Yes I love the colurs and the textures of this  very seasonal
Great read
Mark
x

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From: MSN NicknameMerlin--_--_Sent: 10/9/2008 1:40 PM
This is quite stunning, Kayano. A vivid paiting of images and emotions. Love the last stanza.
 
Merlin

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 10/11/2008 10:54 PM
Thanks all for those gorgeous comments..I have been having a tad of bother with the pc  so forgive my tardiness as replying to other poems..you have no idea what I went through to get onto here...besides threatening to bash the pc and then trying to log on sorta sneaky like lol...again thanks
 
Much love to all
Stella...xxxx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/12/2008 12:30 AM
This is truely a beautifully expressed piece, Stella, I enjoyed reading it immensely...
 
and don't worry about replying, I am having the same problems, between laptop and msn...it's so frustrating, Zy

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 10/15/2008 5:57 PM
aww thanks Zy..how are you my friend?..well I hope?..yes these computer thingies can be so frustrating rather like cars...xxx  (or blokes) >>>legs it

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