Hello Freesoul, You have a good idea for a poem. Try to make it flow and start in the middle.
Its warmth surrounds my body,
The Sun shines on my face
My soul is lost in peace and love,
I am sure there is a fine Poet hiding somewhere. I am looking forward to the next version.
and you can keep me company on this board.
Good luck .....Ramses.
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