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New Poetry Pge 8 : Autumn Leaves ( Part 2)
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From: MSN NicknameMindmanuk  (Original Message)Sent: 10/1/2008 9:57 PM
The light caught your hair
cascading like falling Autumn leaves.
The breeze caught words in the air
they whispered sweet nothings
and nothing lingered
 
The years passed like falling autumn leaves
Heaped memories that I kick around
Skimming stones where the river weaves
the places that we once were found
but nothings left
 
So here we are in twilight corners
your fingers stroke my older face
Your hair is still as I remember
Your countenance still full of grace
and nothings changed
 
We go outside in autumn leaves
watch the stars as mists come in
The year is passing once again
and wonder will we pass again
everythings moved on.
 
 


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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 10/1/2008 10:02 PM
The first three stanzas blew me away  (no pun intended) but I lost the rythm at the end   most prob me Mark  I cannot keep a beat to save my life...Great read..x

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 10/2/2008 12:07 AM
New memories to add to the old ones ? or new hope for the future ?
I can't make up my mind, still a mix of feelings, and a great wistfulness
Jen x

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/2/2008 7:59 AM
rememberance, hints of regret and seasons passing, beautiful Mark

Emma x

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From: MSN Nicknameval64157Sent: 10/3/2008 3:09 PM
Time passing, so quickly, ageing & memories. Yes, we can all relate to this. I like this one as well.

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 10/3/2008 9:11 PM
I'm still in the summer of my years...
...but I'll let you know when I get there.
 
Nice one, Mark! I like the "change" theme throughout this poem.
 
Poetess
xx

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