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Sound Poems : Precious
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From: Maat  (Original Message)Sent: 12/21/2003 12:02 PM
PRECIOUS
 
 
Oh baby did you know how sweet you are to me?
Oh baby did you know you're so precious to me?
Oh baby I have to let you know, you're so damn sweet to me!
Oh baby I have to let you know, you're so damn precious to me!
 
Like a bubble of Love
In the air
You reached me,
Soft like a pair of gloves
Inside you undressed me,
Like a rocking chair
Your hands protected me,
Like a lullaby
Your words appeased me,
Everybody knew my despair
But only you saved me
Everybody sentenced me
But  your spirit healed me;
Darling, you're my Muse
You inspire me
As I breathe in
You give birth
As I breathe out
 
Oh baby did you know how sweet you are to me?
Oh baby did you know you're so precious to me?
Oh baby I have to let you know, you're so damn sweet to me!
Oh baby I have to let you know, you're so damn precious to me!
 
You showed me the way
And today it's for you that I play,
You believed in me
And today I'm so free,
I'm free from mental slavery!
I'm free from insanity!
If I could just hold you now!
If I could just see you now!
If I could just kiss you now!
And make Love to you right now!
Make Love to you
I wanna make Love to you
I wanna make Love to you...
 
Oh baby did you know how sweet you are to me?
Oh baby did you know you're so precious to me?
Oh baby I have to let you know, you're so damn sweet to me!
Oh baby I have to let you know, you're so damn precious to me!
 
 
Lise
(Maat)
 
 precious.mp3  


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From: _susan_Sent: 12/22/2003 4:38 AM
amazing!
 
i'm buying a CD!  save one for me, maat.  haha
 
my only crit in this one:
Oh baby did you know how sweet you are to me?
Oh baby did you know you're so precious to me?
Oh baby I have to let you know, you're so damn sweet to me!
Oh baby I have to let you know, you're so damn precious to me!
 
maybe a weeee too repetitive --
and this is just me, but since my brother named his now deceased dog, "Precious" ---
i find the title - well - a little too precious.  ;-)
susan

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From: _susan_Sent: 12/22/2003 4:46 AM
what type of sound program do you use to record?
is it a studio-type software program?
more background, please, on those mp3's!
 
well, i am interested in hearing more about how you get this quality.
please fill me in at Poets' Radio Forum.
 
words, music, voice = nice blend!
thanks.
susan

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From: MaatSent: 12/22/2003 10:37 AM

Thanks Susan!

I work on music softwares, like "Cubase"...but you can find easier ones like "Magix", "Music Maker"...the quality is due to my equipment, I built up a home studio (I'm a sound engineer)...good quality mic of course, mixer, amplifier, sampler, masteriser...and...2 computers. This way I'm totally independant...and free to put poetry into music!!!

See you in the Poet's Radio Forum !

Maat

 

 

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Sent: 12/22/2003 11:18 AM
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From: _susan_Sent: 12/22/2003 5:05 PM
ack!  i deleted your email addy, maat.
 
i can get it from your member information.
 
not a good idea to post it on the board in full frontal view (so to speak).
 
susan

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From: sueSent: 12/25/2003 7:02 AM
jeez, i'm not reading these boards separately..
 
i was wondering why there were no other comments.
i guess everyone is reading the general board only.
 
their loss.
 
susan

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