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New Poetry Pge 6 : Overt Care
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 11/1/2007 4:14 AM
 
To imply we make impacts
with fragile faith in tactile facts
 
Where is me ~ the me you see
am I there
or anywhere?
 
Where is you ~ in wraith review
with overt care
and shadowed flair?
 
Wherein substance signifys
scanted vision tells no lies
 
 
 
(c) ZYDHA HART   (inspired by Mikhail's 'Lost in worlds of wants and whims')


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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 11/1/2007 5:03 AM
no lies - - - - - - - or all lies - - - - - - - are they the same?
 
very well done dear Zy
 
best,
m

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/1/2007 3:07 PM
aahhh, Mikhail, answering a riddle with a riddle, lol...
 
well, I like to think not, My Friend, perhaps one must determine the source, governments? People, or just potholes in life...who knows for sure, but at least we can try to remove smokescreens, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 11/2/2007 10:07 AM

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/2/2007 2:34 PM
no lies just truth.....

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/2/2007 3:31 PM
First...the title should be 'Overt Clarity' I just forgot when I redited and posted again, lol...very late night scribblings.
 
Hy Everyone, and many thanks for your responses to this experimental piece, I was fooling around with 'homonyns' which are words spelled the same but which can be given different meanings in interpretation....
 
this piece was just a deeper though on cyber space and the friends we make there, we know only that which we are shown and yet, we know much without really knowing (if that makes sense). The contradiction of vision without eyes. Overt...to cover or close over, and Clarity...to see without hindrence, but there is so much more to each of us. Just one of my wierd and wacky 'self imposed' games I love playing with words, it can mean what you want it to mean, it's all in the interpretation of the reader, thanks again, Zy

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 11/2/2007 7:08 PM
The more I read this the more I love it... bear

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