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New Poetry Pge 9 : I weep
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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybear  (Original Message)Sent: 12/21/2008 5:07 PM
I weep
hiding from tomorrow
buried deep in yesterdays
clinging to the good times
remembering how it was
before dementia claimed you
a free spirit now caged
trapped withinin your psyche
unable to be you
and I...
I weep
Copyright ©2008 Don Tyson


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 12/21/2008 6:45 PM
Too sad, Don, watching someone you love losing their memories...I weep also.
 
Mariaxx

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 12/21/2008 7:51 PM
I feel for you, and all those who have to stand by helpless ....

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 12/21/2008 8:01 PM
mm Don   tis a difficult time   worse I believe for the ones who are left to come to terms with anothers loss of self ... a good strong pure write...xx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 12/22/2008 12:35 AM
Such a touching write, Don, as I said before, been there a number of years ago,
 
and occasions like this only make time harder to endure, thinking of you, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameMerlin--_--_Sent: 12/23/2008 2:31 PM
A powerful write, Don. I too can empathise with this.
 
Gordon

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