Thanks Pip, we have such a standard of interesting and innovative poetry around the corner that sometimes it is difficult to make a choice of which to try, but the moment I read cara's poem, I felt so at one with her words.
Cara, you are very kind. I am pleased that you were pleased.....I felt strange reading this one, as I really 'could have' written in this genre, but perhaps it was good to read words such as these from another's perspective , thanks lots for this piece,
Zy