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Creative Writing : In my room of mirrors
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From: MSN NicknameTimaicha  (Original Message)Sent: 3/10/2004 8:30 PM

In my room of mirrors

by Tinka Boukes


Take this hand M�?lady
Hand of steel hand of power

“In my room of mirrors"

In my room with the mirrors on the wall
Curled up like a puppy on my bed
Sleepy peacefully and gracefully
Just lying there dreaming daydreams
When suddenly something moved
Sounded funny to me�? scary
And I am not asleep but wide-awake
I can see it in one mirror
Watching every movement of this “thing�?
My eyes jumping from mirror to mirror
As I was watching his every move
Clack �?clack- click –clack-
Scary squeeeak- squeeeak
Shackle kind of sound from the door side
My eyes slowly moves from mirror to door
Door to mirror and back to door
Then I saw him standing there
Like a amour kind of thing
Steel feet bolted to body
So heavy on the floor
Still very still looking down at me
And a voice came to me�?gentle and soft
Mouth like his body made of steel
I have come to take you as mine come
I am going to take you away far from here
Clack-clack- click-click -clack
Squeeeak squeeeak squeeeak
The sound closer to me now
Lifting one hand reaching out for me
Take this hand M�?lady
Hand of steel hand of power
Heart of an amour ready to steal
He lifts me out of my bed
Into those steal arms so strong
Embrace me very Oh! so very softly
Close to his heart I hear the beat
Carry me out with so much care
Out the door into the safety of his care
Of into his world of passion and love
A world of steel machines
Driving me of in some
Rattle-snake-kiss me quick
Dream-machine-taxi-thing
Out into space out of sight
Into the Galaxy of moon dreams
Into a world of his own universe
Connected to soul we are yes
Like beauty and the beast
Having a feast of love indeed
Feeding each other�?heart to eat
Painful but nice I will do it twice
Filled with spice of life
My Amour my Romeo me Juliet
PPPuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr goes the bell
It’s six o’clock time to get up and go
Oh!!!! Noooo!!! There goes my dream
Once again�?damn it L:((((((((
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Come back!!!!!!!

Copyright © 2004 Tinka Boukes
All Rights Reserved



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From: AnitaSent: 3/12/2004 4:47 AM
Tinky,
This is a wonderful story. I want him to come back too! Darn old alarm clock!
No seriously, I really enjoyed this.
Love Anita

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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 3/12/2004 11:54 AM
Hands Tinka a hammer, don't you just hate it when the alarm wakes you up from a BEAUTIFUL dream? *S*
 
Great write Tinka, I really enjoyed reading this!
 
Hugsssss
Sassy

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From: MSN NicknameTimaichaSent: 3/12/2004 6:26 PM
Sassy & Anita!!
O" thanks a million for reading my work......I am glad you enjoyed it....maybe I will post my balloon ride series someday
That was real fun doing....take care!!
 
Love Tinka

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