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Creative Writing : Astral Travels (Dream of the Knight)
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From: MSN NicknameWizeMuse  (Original Message)Sent: 5/3/2004 1:44 PM

Dream of the Knight

Twas the trusted one
that upon dawn shivers
Cold sweat brow wept
clasps cold steel
Silver blade of night

Is it you fair one
or a phantom come?
A Knight cries aloud
Canst it be a dream
thinks he
or a shadow crossing
covers thee?

The Lady of mystery
shalt be his undoing
Wilt thou suffer me
Ye trusted servant.
No trust ye give
to me Fair

Lady of misty dreams
leads thee to thy fog
Searching whilst alone.
left thou thy trust?

A Knight cries out
Fair and Beauty
knows not my pain
in mine heart
of wanderings
Shalt love beckon thee?

Lady be thee there
I fear I lack courage
to guard castle moat
My steed senses ghosts
I flee in quickened pulse

Knight awakens in dusk
beckons thou entrance
into mine own dream
I reached out.
Lady was not there
nor when midnight falls
nor be she at sunrise

I shalt not reach
those distant shores.
Twas the trusted one
who grasped this steel
sword of silver night?
A Knight shalt shiver
A dream betrayed

A Knight dreams
covered by the peat

Copyright © CJ Clark

 

 



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 Message 2 of 3 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknamejazlin52Sent: 6/15/2005 1:40 AM
A knight's noble heart betrayed...sad write Dale...Lin

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From: AnitaSent: 6/15/2005 4:28 AM
Dale,
You know I love this series! This is so beautifully told.
Anita