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| From:  sk_dev (Original Message) | Sent: 7/24/2006 3:47 AM |
A Dance With the Devil
by Susan K. de Vegter
Tuesday, February 25, 2006
The first of passions with a faceless memory and the youthful lessons of a nubile girl.
~*SKdeV*~
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Midnight's dark moon aflow on the waves
Innocence calling- "try to behave"
Silhouettes bond on beaches�?white sands
Walking embraced... hands gripping hands
Thoughts all together, a sameness festooned
Hearts raw and beating under this moon
Louder the silence of midnight forsakes
Two lover's passion... pushing their brakes
Each step of innocence comes a new dare
Caressing this mystery and pleasuring cares
Reaching for something , risking their ruin
Touching the rhythm of their own wrong-doing
Collapsing on sand dunes...legs weaving slow
Bathed in the moonlight's phosphorous glow
Body's heaving with each rushing wave
It's too late now as nothing behaves
Moisture is beading as energies fly
Arching to arches...moans meeting sighs
Thunderous lightening with no storm in sight
Dancing with the devil in the pale moonlight.
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| | | From: Anita | Sent: 7/24/2006 8:30 PM |
Welcome Susan! We are glad to have you here with us. This poem is passionate and rich in feeling and imagery. Ah, Youth in all it's beginnings and glory!
I hope to see more of your talent here. Anita  |
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Hi Susan!! Glorious imagery per always. You brought to mind my memories of Santa Barbara when I was young. Just a beautiful, passionate surrender. Welcome!!! Lin |
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I tried several times earlier to post but MSN was being a beast in all my groups. I really enjoyed this poem Susan, the imagery was fantastic! I felt a bit like a voyeur, watching this couple on the beach it was that real! Great to have you here! Thanks for sharing your talent with us and I look forward to more! Hugsssssss Sassy *S* |
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This is a beautiful piece. I really enjoyed it. Hugs Dale |
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