Sass-Very romantic and sensual. I found it

very moving and beautiful. I like the pic too.

Hugs

Dale

 

 

i like how this comes to a boil. there are some mistakes here needing correcting.

There is a difference between it's ( a contraction it is) and its (a pronoun referring to an inanimate object). You want its.

You also have a mispelling: (I mispelled this too till I learned better) intertwine, not entertwine.

fantastic write.

 

FLAMES OF MOLTEN PASSION S. Cat Dec 09/03 This deep abiding love of ours radiates hot embers of warmth As it's lightly spreading out across my body and soul Enfolding me like a tightly woven woolen blanket Enveloping me, making me feel whole Envisioning our lips meshing, our hearts and bodies entwining Flames of passion race like wildfire across my skin Raging desire dances along quivering nerves Your magical touch sets off burning fires within Bright bonfires of lust consume us in their flickering lights Passion flares higher and higher with each wave Pulling us down, deep into a vortex of sensuality Each lingering caress, my body you enslave We're riding high on these molten waves of flowing sensations Reaching upwards, crest the summit, striving to peak Feelings surge tauntly, cataclysmic in their intensity Burn me brightly with your fire, this level I seek Flames of molten passion burst forth in climactic splendor Then softly we fall into this deep dark abyss Of satisfaction and satiation as we seek The slumber of Morpheus' bliss.

(font - Lucida Calligraphy)

Reposted as the graphic link failed due to being moved to another album.

Dale and Mindy

 

I know I thanked you both on pager when you posted your lovely comments to this repost, but I'll do it again here.  I thank you very much, it's truly appreciated as are you both!  Hurry back you guys, you're missed! *S*

 

Hugsssssssss

Sassy *S*

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From: <NOBR>mariemuses</NOBR> Sent: 7/11/2005 4:34 PM i like how this comes to a boil. there are some mistakes here needing correcting. There is a difference between it's ( a contraction it is) and its (a pronoun referring to an inanimate object). You want its. You also have a mispelling: (I mispelled this too till I learned better) intertwine, not entertwine. fantastic write.

I appreciate your taking the time to read this and your kind words about the poem. But in regards to what you believe to be mistakes, I need to correct that - those are not mistakes.

You should read it again and substitute "it is" when ever you see an "it's", the rule of thumb is - if you can make that substitution, then the proper form was used, as in this case. I know the difference between when to use a contraction and when to use a possessive, although occassionally typos get missed in proofing.

"As it's lightly spreading out across my body and soul "

"As it is lightly spreading out across my body and soul "

Also I used the correct form - Entwine. I wasn't trying to use ENTERTWINE.

Please see defintion at this link. http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=entwine

Hugsssssss

Sassy *S*

Hey Sassy,

I loved this too! I don't know how I missed commenting before. But this is so beautiful.

LOL> Between you, Dale, Marie, Tinka, and Zaslin, and your lovely sensual poetry, Ethel is getting ideas!!!

Anita

 

 

Thanks Anita, I appreciate it! *S* Hugsssssssssss

 

And is Ethel's butt dragging THAT low? hahahahaha

 

Hugsssssssss

Sassy *S*