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Love & Romance : Fire of Passion
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From: MSN NicknameWizeMuse  (Original Message)Sent: 1/21/2005 6:07 PM
 

 

Fire of Passion

 

Her fire burns
like passion
It has hidden the sun
Her flames jumping
higher than the sky

She rides the clouds
across the red glow
Her lips like cherries
Her breasts ripe and full
like fruit from the vine
Her hips sashaying
in the wind
like palm trees do
Her kisses sweet,
Her embrace strong

The sun keeps a watchful eye
Flames fly
to kiss her heat
Passion knows her well
She burns inside
for him
to lift even higher
As she builds the clouds
The wind blows harder
leaving burning embers
for showers to wash away
Her heart beats for him
pushing the flames
She kisses him
with her sweetness

Her passion is on fire
They breathe each other
in whispers
Her passion flames higher
and is consumed
by love
so cool and wet,
with cherry passion
It soothes their bodies
with raptures true embrace
Lovers interlaced in harmony

© CJ Clark
All Rights Reserved

 

 



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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 1/21/2005 10:29 PM
Dale,
 
Such a burning love, that you're going to make the sun jealous of the heat of the flames they create!  Beautiful poem.
 
I love the graphics you are using for these poems, great job!
 
Hugsssssssssss
Sassy *S*
 
 

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From: MindySent: 1/22/2005 6:31 AM
"She Burns inside for him"    ...  ah, sweet temptation -- flaming passion!
 
..."Until wet, cherry passion cools their bodies."
 
Whew! -- how am I ever going to stop smoking after reading poetry like this Dale? 
 
Sassy is right -- Aside from your steamy, sensuous words, your graphics are very nice.  This is a particularly lovely one. 
 
Hugs and Love,
 
Mindy  :-)

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From: MSN NicknamemariemusesSent: 1/22/2005 5:55 PM
Ooooh, baby, you definitely light my fire. Sizzling super write.

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