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Love & Romance : Man & Woman
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(3 recommendations so far) Message 1 of 6 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameWizeMuse  (Original Message)Sent: 2/21/2005 7:11 PM

Man & Woman
by Dale & Joni Clark

Exquisite was his hands
fingers long and slender
their touch strong yet gentle

Massive is his body
arms & legs of unbridled beauty
their  movements so graceful

Exquisite was her shape
Her breasts like the fruit of life
her nipples hard and erect

Long and lithe her legs
her hands like silk upon me
they move artistically with passion

to be loved by this man
is intrinsic
Awaiting him always vestrus

Knowing the portal of his essence
stays close to me

I dream of his power
and feel him deep inside
as he brings me to ecstacy

to love this woman
is heavenly
I embrace her harmonically

traverse her curves gently
alluring, they move in our passion
I breathe her symphonically

Notes of love
our orgasmic melody

This man & woman
loving in color and verse
creating a masterpiece

© CJ Clark

 

 




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 Message 2 of 6 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamemariemusesSent: 2/21/2005 7:30 PM
This is simply awesome. This is just classic -- captures the essence of lovemaking is such a glorious way. Applause to you both!

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 Message 3 of 6 in Discussion 
From: AnitaSent: 2/22/2005 12:26 AM
This is just magnificant! Bravo! A masterpiece!
Anita

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 Message 4 of 6 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 2/22/2005 2:18 AM
Dale, Joni,
 
What an exquisite write.  This is so passionate and sensuous. 
 
Joni, we always knew Dale could write but WOW, you're very talented yourself.  I sure hope to see more poetry from you.  Would you consider joining us here at SM?  
 
Hugssssssss
Sassy *S*

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 Message 5 of 6 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameWizeMuseSent: 2/22/2005 4:23 PM
Marie-Thanks so much for your support.
 
Anita-Thanks and where have you been? lol
Missed you.
 
Sassy-She doesn't write much poetry but
Thanks anyway, the deal was she said can
you write a poem if I just give you a word.
I said heck yeah lol look how I jinxed myself.
But that's how this came about and she can
write can't she. But she's mostly an artist.
She always makes me look bad, so better
half yep you could safely say that. LOL
 
Huggers
Dale

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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 2/22/2005 7:56 PM
You've mentioned before, what a talented artist your wife is, maybe you could post some of her art work to this site?
 
Keep making deals with her Dale and then maybe she'll write more poems herself and we'd love to have her join us here too! *S*
 
Hugsssssss
Sassy *S*

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