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Love & Romance : Oh, my Lady
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(3 recommendations so far) Message 1 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameWizeMuse  (Original Message)Sent: 3/4/2005 5:22 PM

Oh, my Lady

 

Oh, my lady, my darling love
It came to me, cosmically

We are shooting stars
falling from the sky with fiery tails
Our meeting is the light
It brightens our eyes

Oh, my lady, my precious one
you couldn't know our souls

I may never hold you, feel your heart
but I can imagine a tempest
of passionate ecstacy
We only know from a distance

Oh, my lady, I dream of you
I think of you as my soulful cup

We are like the wind
blown into the storm
I imagine your flesh in my mind
I dream of our bodies intertwined

Oh, my lady, I imagine you
your skin like silk, I caress you

Your breasts like golden orbs
you must taste sweet as honey
you are sensitive and spiritual
you bring me hope and a dream

Oh, my lady, you fill my heart
in dreams of temptuous agony

I may never know you fully
or ever hold you in my arms
I imagine showing you my love
I dream it's so, the feelings true

Oh, my lady, I desire you
your body, soul, flesh and blood

I imagine your beauty and love
as one I could touch and feel
Though we may have another
isn't there always a way

Oh, my lady, you make me happy
just to imagine your essence

I imagine our climax in torrid heat
and see our dreams in color
I know your beauty by sight
but touching you is out of mind

Oh, my lady, you are beautiful
your breath intoxicating

Your kisses sweetly whispering
I imagine it that way, only...
your soul touches me at night
I see a falling star, a cosmic event


© CJ Clark
 

 



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 Message 2 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 3/4/2005 6:08 PM
Dale,
 
I'm running outta smelling salts for ETHEL and COOKIE!   You're giving them all hot flashes and heart palpatations with all these HOT poems, especially when you do them in PINK! LOL
 
*gone to drug store for some revival meds for everyone!*  
 
Good job Dale! *S*
 
Hugssssssss
Sassy *S*

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 Message 3 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameTimaichaSent: 3/4/2005 6:21 PM
Pwew!! This is hotand such a joy to readgetting hotter now!!
 
Have Mercy....man my heart!!
 
Love  Tinka!!! 

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 Message 4 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MindySent: 3/4/2005 6:55 PM
Oh my Dale!
 
I will just lean here for a moment...
 
Sass ...HURRY!!! 
 
thud

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 Message 5 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 3/4/2005 7:18 PM
FOR MINDY---->>>

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 Message 6 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 3/4/2005 7:22 PM
Sounds like Tinka might want some of those smelling salts too!!
 
*gone back to drug store again*     LOL
 
Hugssssssss
Sassy *S*

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 Message 7 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameWizeMuseSent: 3/4/2005 9:24 PM
LOL Well smelling salts or just another poem
by me eh? I'm kidding, thanks guys for such
flattery, it will get you everything.
Big Hugs
Dale

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 Message 8 of 13 in Discussion 
From: AnitaSent: 3/4/2005 11:14 PM
Well I just got up. I worked all night but let me tell you THIS WOKE ME UP! Got anymore of those smelling salts, Sassy? Old Ethel just keeled over again!!!!
LOL! YOU DID IT AGAIN DALE!
Anita

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 Message 9 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 3/5/2005 1:46 AM
See how pink she turned Dale?  Almost the colour of the pic! LOL
 
Only the smelling salts revived poor Ethel!
 
 
 
PS - New animation program I'm testing - so if it doesn't work, you'll know why! LOL
 
Hugssssssss
Sassy *S*

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 Message 10 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamemariemusesSent: 3/5/2005 5:45 AM
You've created the ideal lady. Does she exist, I wonder. I like how you put the ladies on the pedestal. You do this with class and charm like other poets who have done this in the past. I believe you have a knack for elevating the lady in poetry.

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 Message 11 of 13 in Discussion 
From: AnitaSent: 3/7/2005 6:01 PM
LMAO Sassy, you are so funny! And so talented.
Anita

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 Message 12 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 3/8/2005 1:27 AM
LMAO - Ah thanks Anita - I'm glad you enjoyed it! *S*
 
Hugsssssss
Sassy *S*

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 Message 13 of 13 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknameiampooh2Sent: 3/8/2005 9:35 PM
Absolutly beathe taking... and what a vividly passionate dream...

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