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Love & Romance : Dreams of ruby red...Part II
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From: MSN NicknameWizeMuse  (Original Message)Sent: 3/11/2005 2:30 AM

 

 Dreams of ruby red...Part II

 

Sun rises in orange hues...

We watch the dawn
as I set, touching fingertips
our lips part

We cry together
If you'll come to me
I'd stop the sun

It shines in orange pink hues...
An orgasm arises
in eternal light

We'll be two stars
you and I
side by side, insatiable

We shine day and night
dawn appears softly
I embrace her

You say hold me
and I open my arms
together in orange hues...

We cry tears of blood
ruby red
it streaks the sky

You said fly
and we see our dreams
shadows are getting long

and longing...

If you'll come to me
I'll move perpetually

I'll chase the moon
I'll cry for you
I'll dream of you
alone
in hues of dawning

We watch our shadows
drift apart
together we see

the sun, the moon, the stars
a heavenly motion

They move, I move
They pause, I stop
you and I part

I shall set in silence

One day we'll rise and set
together in orange hues
if I dream it...

© CJ Clark



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From: MSN NicknamemariemusesSent: 3/11/2005 4:13 AM
Vivid colors and nice tie into amor. Glorious write.

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From: MSN Nicknameiampooh2Sent: 3/14/2005 7:14 PM
So beautiful yet so sad...
hugs, pooh

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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 3/14/2005 7:41 PM
Dale,
 
It's a beautiful poem, lovely words, lovely presentation.  I do have a question though, am I interpreting this right?
 
I get a sense that it's the moon and sun, wanting to be lovers, but forever kept apart as one sets and the other rises.
 
Hugsssssssss
Sassy *S*

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From: MSN NicknameWizeMuseSent: 3/15/2005 12:40 AM
Sassy, Yes and no lol not sure really
that was kind of the idea though I thought
really it is the idea of unrequieted love perhaps.
A dream is a dream, sometimes they come
to be sometimes not. Or as I heard it written
Ask me not, and I have answers, Ask why and
I know not. lol
Hugs
Dale

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