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Love & Romance : Liquid Heaven Part2
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From: MSN Nicknamejazlin52  (Original Message)Sent: 5/13/2005 5:43 AM
I'm a silk cloud for your head
A feast for your hungry mouth
You reside in the realm of Valhalla
Rivulets of pleasure run from your fingers
Rivers and seas of pomegranet from your lips
The budded flower blooms swollen
Electric blue waves swell and descend
A planet is formed and dies alive
The sun sets and rises from a red sea
My passion for you kindles my very core
My desire is molten, only you--
Only you can fill this valley of wanting
You are a god--thunder in  my wanton heart
Thor weilding the steel hammer Mjollnir
You forge metal in my sacred fire
Plunge red-hot joy into my soul
I speak in tongues as earth quakes
 
 
Linda Gayton  Copyright 2005
 


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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 5/13/2005 6:50 AM
Jazlin,
 
I like this Norse-themed sensual tale!
 
May Freyja watch o'er you!
 
Hugsssssss
Sassy *S*

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From: MSN NicknameWizeMuseSent: 5/13/2005 4:30 PM
Linda-This is a gem, so beautiful and sensuous.
I'm enthralled and inspired by this work of art.
You are so talented, just love your work!!!
Hugs & Kisses
Dale

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From: MSN Nicknamejazlin52Sent: 5/13/2005 5:38 PM
Thanks, Dale. Encouragement helps! Your poems just seem to flow...Lin

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From: MSN Nicknamejazlin52Sent: 5/13/2005 5:39 PM
Hey 'Sassy', thanks! I had a thunderstorm for inspiration...Lin

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From: MSN NicknamemariemusesSent: 5/14/2005 6:09 AM
I like the throw back to the old mythic peoples such as Vallhala. I am of German descent and know about this magical and mythical place. this is an epic with some fire rooted in classic folklore.

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From: MSN Nicknamejazlin52Sent: 5/14/2005 4:08 PM
Thank you so much, Marie...Lin

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From: MSN NicknameTimaichaSent: 5/14/2005 6:57 PM
Wonderful posting Linda!!
 
Okay I did not know Which Linda...lol...now I know one on one YOU!!
 
Welcome to SM...a little late but hey I am a VERY busy mamma!!
 
Love Tinka

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From: MSN Nicknamejazlin52Sent: 5/14/2005 7:34 PM
No sweat, Tinks. I know you're a bee pollinatin' the universe. Thanks
sis....Lin

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