Dear Lin, 
This is a wonderfully intriguing story/poem. Sensuality blended with terror is a winning combination. I particularly love this line:
"For the moon was his mistress tho I was to be his bride."
So much is said in that one line.
I encourage and hope to see this entrancing story embellished and published.
Applause & Compliments!
Hugs,
Mindy
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