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| From:  Sassy_Catt (Original Message) | Sent: 4/3/2005 6:14 PM |
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Lovebirds nestled close
Feeling each other's heartbeat
'Til one flies away
| | | S. Cat Mar 28 2005 | | | | | | | | | | | |
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This is bittersweet but so beautiful, at least for a little while. Isn't it always the moment? And then it changes. Such is life. Hugs Dale |
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| | | From: Anita | Sent: 4/11/2005 6:36 PM |
Great Haiku Sassy and about right too! Anita |
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| | | From: Mindy | Sent: 4/12/2005 8:46 PM |
Hi Sassy,  Simple and sweet ...a swirl of nature's honesty swept through my heart with a flitting of regret at the thought of love's departure. To me, this is what makes haiku great! An emotional journey with so few words. The tender image of the love birds is enough to evoke emotion, alone. Just lovely Sassy! Love and Hugs, Mindy :-) |
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Dale, Anita, Mindy Thank you all of you for your kind words, I really appreciate it! For some reason, I just love haiku, senryu and tanka writing. Hugssssssssss Sassy *S* |
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When we forget ourselves, love stays close. When we only think of ourselves, love flies away. Fine write....Lin |
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Thank you Jazlin, I appreciate your comments! Sorry I havent' gotten back to you sooner, but I've not been online much lately. Hugssssss Sassy *S* |
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