Hahaha... too late, Dear Fluff, you are already in it,  lol

 

I see in your poem a fear of the unknown and the wish for another to take responsibility for the future (in all respects) but My Young Friend....if you have opened a door, you should at least find out what lies behind it....even if it means you taking the first step. No? Little in life is irreversible.

 

Like the way you use the wording so that you are making conditions at the start and removing them at the end, lol, more or less my synopsis, love, Zy x

wow - gulp - well done Fluff

 

not Raunchy at all - steamy though

 

consistent with you ability to feel (and express) at a level many cannot

 

most well done Fluff,

m

liked this Fluff...liked the tentive feel about it...x

Fluff this is beautifully written

I didn't find this raunchy at all!  Of course, I love reading romance novels about pirates who ravage damsels!

Superbly sensuous, Fluff.  Exceptional writing...bear

Sensuous and filled with eros...loved it.

 

Maria