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New Poetry Pge 8 : New Life For Old
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From: MSN NicknameRhumour  (Original Message)Sent: 10/3/2008 10:24 AM
Autumn's graceful scatter of leaves red, gold and brown
Soon produce this soft warm carpet to cover all around
Bedding for those that hibernate all the winter through
The hedgehog, the badger and small creatures like the shrew
 
And as we walk our dogs and children along the wooded paths
The crystalled air is filled with their joyful barks and laughs
When frosts come soon the brittled leaves are broken down
The fragments make a compost that mixes with the ground
 
And waiting for that feast below are so many worms and bugs
Chewing up the fragments and leaving lots of fertile dust
On warmer days in winter badgers may come out to have a stretch
And dine upon some worms they find as in the mulch they scratch
 
And sometime in the spring's soft light new ferns will surely sprout
Look around and see where green crozier fronds are peeping out
Some bulbs may sport their first fresh leaves and bluebells follow soon
Their pale blue carpet looks divine when seen by the gentle light of moon
 
Not long now till the song birds fill the air with their delight
Spring has sprung as ever and brings with it such fair sights
With life renewed our hopes are high that this year will be one
That sometime in the future we will have great memories to dwell upon
 
(c)Rhumour
October 3rd 2008


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 10/3/2008 5:00 PM
Well expressed prose...loved it...
 
Mariaxx

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 Message 3 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameRhumourSent: 10/3/2008 7:38 PM
Many thanks Maria - it was inspired by the leaves turning colour here............

Best wishes
Rhumour

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 10/4/2008 12:15 AM
Well done Rhumour, a lovely reminder that the seasons turn full circle - and I like the idea that this year will be the one for great memories

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 Message 5 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 10/4/2008 2:35 PM
I like the feel of rhyming couplets Rhumour    this has a lovely flow to it which doesnt jarr the ears    and the colour of your font matches too..nice one..x

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 Message 6 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameRhumourSent: 10/4/2008 5:08 PM
Thank you Jenny - I always feel it is best to keep the nicest aspects of life in mind whether looking forwards or backwards.
 
Best wishes
Rhumour

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From: MSN NicknameRhumourSent: 10/4/2008 5:14 PM
Many thanks Kayano    I have a preference for smooth rhymes myself, rather a lot of my scribbles down the years have been lyrics for my song writing efforts which probably influences my approach to the poems too.
 
Best wishes
Rhumour

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From: MSN Nicknamesteve_riggsSent: 10/4/2008 9:21 PM
A fine poem rhyme, which gently eases one into autumn Rhumour
I suspect nature is close to your heart.

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From: MSN NicknameRhumourSent: 10/5/2008 12:29 AM
Many thanks Steve   and yes I will admit to a lifetime of interest in nature, particularly woodland environments of all kinds.
 
best wishes
Rhumour

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 10/5/2008 1:05 AM
Sometimes we poets can see things that others just take for granted.
I can sense a "born again" theme in this poem. Am I right?
A fantastic write, Rhumour!

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From: MSN NicknameRhumourSent: 10/5/2008 10:19 AM
You are so very kind Poetess, thank you.
 
The 'born again'  aspect is in the context of the seasons pretty much an annual event of course, but presuming for a few moments that you may be alluding to my own life then yes. in a sense I am looking to make a fresh start in various senses.
 
Some mobility problems have arisen in the last few months due to a mix of whiplash and ageing have caused me to be sidelined form conventional jobs now.  So I am looking to move to easier premises and hope to find some income generation from creative writing again -  15 years in the measurement & control instrumentation during the 80's & 90's  ended abruptly when I was widowed with 3 young children.  But if I can't travel I can still write, so who knows?
 
Meantime I am trying to select a mix of poems to publish in a book - might not make any real income but it will be another item for the CV, hehe.
 
Best wishes
Rhumour
 
 

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