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Creative Writing : Moon in Armour (Knights Honor)
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From: MSN NicknameWizeMuse  (Original Message)Sent: 5/10/2005 4:39 PM

Sassy-This is my newest one so have a look

and hopefully we'll get our serial works back.

It really sucks of MSN what s their problem.

Let me know.

Dale

 

Moon in Armour

Knights Honor

The knights gathered
at yonder clearing
They found it by chance
just as their brave Prince

Sir James saw hope here
He felt his Prince was near

A sunny day so bright
that morning of deliverance
He saw the tangled path clearly
in his mind he envisioned victory

Four Knights from east & west
went in search of the castle
and their Prince & Princess
They would send a runner back

The forest thickens and fills
with shadows, it was faded
They would find the way difficult
with the Black Knight watching

The Prince was weary and awakened
to the sunbeams shining upon him

He knew his strength was waning
even though he felt the love
coming from within the castle
He was afraid he couldn't last

He'd fallen asleep, with depridation
Twilight had come upon him
He knew it was love and honor
that drove him to prepare to fight

Suddenly, he hears the laughter
The Black Knight is near
The stars are starting to appear
and in the horizon he sees the moon

It's armour is shining...



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 Message 2 of 5 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 5/11/2005 2:34 AM
Good job Dale - I'll make a graphics for it in a few days, and as for what's wrong with MSN - maybe you should write them, they only usually deal with the creator/manager of a group.  I have no idea why it's messed up in here - I checked other groups to see if it was widespread, but my other ones all work fine.
 
Hugsssssss
Sassy *S*

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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 5/11/2005 2:35 AM
Never mind about contacting them - I just tried again and now it's all working! LOL
 
Hugssssss
Sassy *S*

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From: MSN NicknamemariemusesSent: 5/27/2005 5:32 AM
this has class and humor. it has a moral. one should never sleep on the job even if you are a knight. clever write.

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From: MSN Nicknamejazlin52Sent: 5/29/2005 7:06 PM
I love this series, Dale. What will be their ultimate fate? This is what keeps the reader's attention, and the beauty of the writing...Lin

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