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Love & Romance : Liquid Heaven - Part 1 - reposted for Jazlin
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From: MSN NicknameSassy_Catt  (Original Message)Sent: 5/11/2005 6:36 AM

Liquid Heaven - Part 1

Your eyes are gentle rain and hard sky
That line between day and night
Your hands are weathered tender
So strong, I'm soft leather in working hands
I feel the pulse in your fingertips
Warm trails travel my form
A feather from ear to navel to buttocks
Slow hand, smooth and firm
I tremble in anticipation, inhale air
You catch my breath in your mouth
Liquid heaven, your tongue moans hunger...
And sups flesh ear to breast
My breasts are two swollen moons
eclipsed by your mouth
You suck dreams from my nipples one by one
I press your head harder to me
And share all my visions
You drop candle wax kisses breast to mound
Across my hips and running into inner thigh
A cloud pillow for your head, so soft
That your mouth lingers there, lost in silk...



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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 5/11/2005 6:37 AM
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From: <NOBR>MSN NicknameWizeMuse</NOBR> Sent: 5/10/2005 10:52 AM
Oh so sensual it is! I love it. Very sexy.
and might I say HOT HOT HOT!
Thanks for posting Linda!
Hugs & Kisses
Dale

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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 5/11/2005 6:37 AM
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From: <NOBR>MSN NicknameTimaicha</NOBR> Sent: 5/10/2005 3:09 PM
Stunning poetry!!
 
Keep them coming!!
 
Love Tinka

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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 5/11/2005 6:39 AM
Jazlin,
 
Welcome to SM!  I enjoyed your first poem!  It was very sensual.
 
Hugsssssss
Sassy *S*

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From: AnitaSent: 5/11/2005 11:46 PM
Welcome Jazlin!
Your poem is beautiful.
Anita

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From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 5/12/2005 6:07 AM

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From: <NOBR>MSN Nicknamemariemuses</NOBR> Sent: 5/12/2005 12:00 AM
this is exquisite and smokin'. looking forward to the next part. well done!

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From: MSN Nicknamejazlin52Sent: 5/12/2005 3:22 PM
Thankyou! And thanks for the help 'Sassy'!

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