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New Poetry Pge 5 : The Fog
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From:

VocalDix (Original Message)

Sent: 10/18/2006 4:34 PM

The fog has come, swallowing

everything up in its grayness.

Moving from the East, swiftly across

the city.

Denseness of nonentity engulfing

all in its path.

What evil lurks behind its walls?

Aspects of life disappear, no

vision is ascertained.

I am behind glass, and yet

I fear being captured in its horror.

Is Death approaching, or am I to

just be erased and dissipate in the mist.

Tapping, tendrils trying to enter

my domain. It is here.....

Dixie Scott/Copyrighted 10/18/06)

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Message 2 of 9 in Discussion

Sent: 10/18/2006 6:39 PM

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Message 3 of 9 in Discussion

From:

Zydha

Sent: 10/20/2006 12:58 AM

So atmospheric, Dix, really enjoyed this, Zy

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Sent: 10/20/2006 12:51 PM

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From:

VocalDix

Sent: 10/20/2006 3:26 PM

Thanks Stella, Zy and especially Peter! You guys have to keep me company now for my Michael went home at 7am! Wahhhhhh! I am going for Christmas up there however lol.

Message 6 of 9 in Discussion

From:

elizabeth-armstrong

Sent: 10/22/2006 7:13 PM

Hi Dixie,

I really liked this - it had an ominous feel to it, and I do feel you get that with thick fog, although I also like to think of it as a soft blanket folding everything up in its emptiness. This was definitely a Hallowe'en mist! I enjoyed reading.

Elizabeth xxx

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From:

Bouncing_Fluff

Sent: 10/25/2006 8:33 PM

Hi Dixie

I loved this, the image you create is just... wow lol. The choice of words you use, the layout, everything, just give such an atmosphere and one line that I wish, wish, WISH I had written is "or am I to just be erased" - stunning!

Fluff x

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Sent: 10/25/2006 9:24 PM

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From:

Cara_inSpirit

Sent: 10/26/2006 4:12 PM

This reminds me of a dream I had long ago...the line I am behind glass really stired a memory .

Cara

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