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Whether a poet or not, taking up this poetry challenge may reveal a truth about yourself you didnt know...you are a poet and don't know it! ;) This is exactly how I began writing poetry, a friend challenged me to write a quick simple rhyming poem out of the blue. I couldnt imagine being able to just draw a poem out of my hat like that...but he pushed me to do it and swore he knew I could. Well..I did, and even my first poem out of my hat did prove...I was a poet and didnt know it. Doesnt mean I'm good one, but, poetry is all in the eye of the beholder anyway...and I admit, I love my poems as they are an expressive tool that releases blocked energy and they always end up revealing something about myself to myself. So to me, they are as wee children I've created from my emotional self (good or bad). I hope that all who reads this Poetry Challenge will take me up on this challenge and write a one or more verse (4 lines per verse) poem about a very scarey dream or fear that you have/had. Or, anything that pops into your mind first. If you do it quickly with the least amount of thought and fear...you will see how fast a poem can just pop out of your mind, as if it had been waiting there for years. What is surprising is that once you begin....its hard to stop...and please, if at all possible, have the poem to rhyme. Rhyming is a good way to guide your next verse and it shows you just how simple poetry can truly be. Happy Poeting, birdy |
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Lannie,
What a beautiful little poem that says sooo much!!! Thank you for
taking the poetry challenge...you should certainly write more poetry...your
simple expression says a lot!
Blessings,
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fwa...such a beautiful poem that sounded music to my ears as I read
it.
Thank you for taking the poetry challenge...your heart speaks with
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Blessings,
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HI and thanks's LOL...I'm working on writing more... Love Skybolt, |
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In a message dated 5/4/2006 7:05:01 P.M. Pacific Standard Time,
[email protected] writes: HI and
thanks's LOL...I'm working on writing more... Love
Skybolt,
Sky,
Look forward to reading more of your poems...please post them if you feel
comfortable with doing so!
Blessings,
birdy |
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Oh my, from thought and then to paper.. Now where do I go? I see color, feel energy and dance in emotion Language is hard for me to express when music speaks When there is truly only one word: Love When I look in your eyes, they smile back in mine There are times I forget that I am me, and You are you The simple things like breathing I forget If you asked me my name when you smiled, I forgot We talk with our eyes and love with our hearts There is no more powerful communication felt than this Why is it that mere words seem to fail us? When all we need to do is "Look"? Perhaps to help the rest of our friends; Communication is critical; when we talk too fast Help me now my love with the words please For when you smile at me, I too forget what I am saying. "Ode to my Sweetheart".. |
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Gia Kat!!!
I Love it, Love it, Love it!!! I do believe many of my own poems are dotted here and there thru out your poem!
Thanks for sending! It was a joy to read!!!
birdy
Oh my, from thought and then to paper..
Now where do I go?
I see color, feel energy and dance in emotion
Language is hard for me to express when music speaks
When there is truly only one word: Love
When I look in your eyes, they smile back in mine
There are times I forget that I am me, and You are you
The simple things like breathing I forget
If you asked me my name when you smiled, I forgot
We talk with our eyes and love with our hearts
There is no more powerful communication felt than this
Why is it that mere words seem to fail us?
When all we need to do is "Look"?
Perhaps to help the rest of our friends;
Communication is critical; when we talk too fast
Help me now my love with the words please
For when you smile at me, I too forget what I am saying.
"Ode to my Sweetheart"..
Love Gia Kat Sebrona |
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Shame spilt her beauty Bleak endless weeping Liquid sorrow spills To drown in nowhere night Deeper shadows stalk light's sorrow Stealth requires darker shades Vulnerable Nowhere night
Yearning Desire to be free Shackled by the deepest dark Evil savages dawn Sacred winds beckon 
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Veeeery Deeeep fwa!!!
Its a poem that draws the dark emotions
yet frees them with the last sentence.
Thanks for sharing!
birdy
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Savage
Shame spilt her beauty
Bleak endless weeping
Liquid sorrow spills
To drown in nowhere night
Deeper shadows stalk light's sorrow
Stealth requires darker shades
Vulnerable
Nowhere night
Yearning
Desire to be free
Shackled by the deepest dark
Evil savages dawn
Sacred winds beckon
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| | | Whether a poet or not, taking up this poetry challenge may reveal a truth about yourself you didnt know...you are a poet and don't know it! ;) This is exactly how I began writing poetry, a friend challenged me to write a quick simple rhyming poem out of the blue. I couldnt imagine being able to just draw a poem out of my hat like that...but he pushed me to do it and swore he knew I could. Well..I did, and even my first poem out of my hat did prove...I was a poet and didnt know it. Doesnt mean I'm good one, but, poetry is all in the eye of the beholder anyway...and I admit, I love my poems as they are an expressive tool that releases blocked energy and they always end up revealing something about myself to myself. So to me, they are as wee children I've created from my emotional self (good or bad). I hope that all who reads this Poetry Challenge will take me up on this challenge and write a one or more verse (4 lines per verse) poem about a very scarey dream or fear that you have/had. Or, anything that pops into your mind first. If you do it quickly with the least amount of thought and fear...you will see how fast a poem can just pop out of your mind, as if it had been waiting there for years. What is surprising is that once you begin....its hard to stop...and please, if at all possible, have the poem to rhyme. Rhyming is a good way to guide your next verse and it shows you just how simple poetry can truly be. Happy Poeting, birdy | | |
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| | From:  1skybolt | Sent: 10/06/2008 10:35 p.m. |
Hi everyone, Lot's of great poems on here, You all have a wonderful way with words. It's like a puzzle for me ,, ya know to find the right words. But this is a poem I wrote when my daughter and I had a fight and she moved back to florida. Things are great now though..Well with my daughters any way lol.. Love and hugs to you all Skybolt, DEAR LIFE Could you take my heart and put it in a place where it will be safe and won't have to see a face. DEAR LIFE Could you take my heart and put it in a plcae where it will be free and lots of space. DEAR LIFE Could you take my heart and scrape it from this life, fix the cracks and tears and the walls it bares. DEAR LIFE Could you take my heart to that special place where the angels arch. Lannie Brown |
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| | | From: 1skybolt | Sent: 10/06/2008 10:42 p.m. |
Hi friends ,,I wrote this one when some friends got married at some other friends party lol. WEDDING DAY LOVE IS GREAT LOVE IS GRAND JAMON AND ANDREA GOT MARRIED AT DAN'S IT WAS A PARTY FOR LOT'S OF REASON'S I LOVE THE SPRING MY FAVORITE SEASON. LOVE IS GREAT LOVE IS GRAND JAMON AND ANDREA TOOK A STAND, AT TANNER'S CREEK WE'LL WATCH AND WEEP AS SWEET WORDS ARE SAID TO EACH. LOVE IS GREAT LOVE IS GRAND FRIENDS WILL WATCH YOU TAKE EACH OTHER'S HAND AND WITH ALL THE LOVE BUT ON A WEDDING BAND. MAY 27TH 2006 I GUESS YOU KNOW NOW IT'S TIME FOR A KISS. LANNIE BROWN LOL....... |
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awesome sky, thankyou for sharing :) Poems can be so personal so its can be like sharing a intimate part of yourself in another way Blessings Misty |
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| | | From: 1skybolt | Sent: 11/06/2008 10:06 p.m. |
Hi Misty, Thank you very much,,,aw just little words that come to mind for me...I hope everyone keeps on with writing poems. Hugs to everyone Skybolt, |
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