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New Poetry Pge 5 : Sensual Seduction
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 10/21/2006 11:21 PM

I did this one in Audio last week and remembered I hadn't posted the words, but Mikhail's Bbrrrr brought this one to mind again. It is an oldie though.

 

SENSUAL SEDUCTION



The heat of your enticement

Smoulders to my eyes.

I sink myself into your depths

Breathing silent sighs.

You touch my offered body

Where noone else can go,

Sublime is the seduction

By scented candle glow.

Inhaling your aroma,

One chosen sensually,

It moistens and caresses

The privacy of me.

You curb my inhibitions

We share this time as one,

My hands drop deep to find you

Slippery object of my fun.

Escaping searching fingers

Still close, I have no doubt,

I'll hold you in my hand again...

 

When I pull the 'bath plug' out !!!

 



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Sent: 10/21/2006 11:58 PM
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From: MSN Nicknameelizabeth-armstrongSent: 10/22/2006 7:07 PM
Hi Zy,
 
I thought this cheeky poem was really well-written...especially the way you didn't reveal the twist until the last line, which made me chuckle. I could fancy a nice long soak in a warm bath actually, but it's difficult to find the time. Hmmm... the little pleasures in life make it all worthwhile.
 
Elizabeth xxx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/23/2006 1:07 AM
Thanks, Stella, now and then I find I start something sultry, but, lol, they frequently dissolve into a fun ending.
 
I like writing humourous stuff, but it usually has to be spontanious. Pleased this gave you a smile, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/23/2006 1:09 AM
See my reply to Stella, Elizabeth, it is one of my delights when something takes it's own course and I have to really think of the 'punch-line.
 
Thanks, it's nice to know it made some smile, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 10/23/2006 3:12 PM
LOL you had me going until the last line too lol.  I was imagining what my Michael did to me all week haha.

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/23/2006 4:39 PM
Shshshs...don't tell everybody, , but seriously, I guess you are going to miss him, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameBouncing_FluffSent: 10/25/2006 8:28 PM
 Hehe I have read this quite a few times before Zy and it still makes me giggle! You have a real way of drawing the reader in and then making the last line something that nobody would EVER expect it to be lol, I love it!
 
Love always, Fluff xx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/25/2006 11:01 PM
Batteries, Peter? Batteries???
 
Oohhhh...pacemaker, errr....right, now don't you do anything I could be blamed for!!! .lol
 
Please you enjoyed, Peter, thanks, Zy x

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 10/26/2006 4:02 PM
Going to Quebec for Christmas Zy!  I will have to have Michael and I say hi to you all from his pc lol.

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