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New Poetry Pge 6 : The Last Drop
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 10/30/2007 2:07 AM
 
Give to me a ball of wool
and I will knit you warm,
send to me a paper sheet
so I may write a storm,
blow to me a kiss on breeze
for I am waiting here,
but never turn your back on me
or ~ drown in my last tear.
 
 
 
(c) ZYDHA HART 2007
 
 
(inspired by Kayano's 'You used to think the world of me')


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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 10/30/2007 2:17 AM
Oh, I like this.  Says a lot... bear

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/30/2007 2:56 AM
Hy, bear, thank you, Stella's piece just nudged the muse,  Zy

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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 10/30/2007 7:40 AM
Beautifully put, I am glad Stella inspired you...
 
Maria

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 10/30/2007 10:14 AM

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 10/30/2007 2:30 PM
I like this too!

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/30/2007 4:42 PM
Thanks, Maria, I love it when another's words bounce in and nudge the muse, lol,
 
and when it happens to others, it gives a rewarding feeling of movement, Zy

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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 10/30/2007 6:53 PM
Hi Zy !  now that resonated with me in a very touching way and I have read it several times  those hopeful affirmations with just a hint of anxiety at the end...lovely indeed... from .. jimmy

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From: MSN NicknameForgottenMelody4Sent: 10/30/2007 9:25 PM
Short, but very sweet.

Melody x

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/31/2007 1:36 AM
Your replies are always most welcome, Jimmy,
 
I enjoy your reviews of my work very much, thanks, Zy 

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/31/2007 1:37 AM
Thanks, Melody, some just come out that way, Zy x

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 10/31/2007 8:19 PM
oh how lovely.....I have this huge corny smile on  my face...thankyou....xxx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/1/2007 1:18 AM
Hy, Stella, twas all your fault,  lol, but seriously....
 
I read your super piece and the words just popped into my head, so ywc and thank you, Zy

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