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New Poetry Pge 9 : Collaged Contentment: Sunday Repost (and Edit)
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 12/21/2008 1:08 AM

 

Can you wipe away my tears
Can you write away my fears
Is your wisdom only yours
Knowing what a life endures
Can you change the sifting sand
And turn back time
 
Are the words now scribed in stone
When they flow from blood alone
 
Complacence and contentment
No traces of resentment
What lessons have you learned
Has no flame of life yet burned
How I wish the look of peace
You show ~ was mine
 
 
(c)  ZYDHA HART  2005


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 12/21/2008 6:37 PM
I cannot do any of the things you ask, but I can empathize...really lovely Zy.
 
Mariaxx

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From: MSN NicknamejennypollSent: 12/21/2008 7:40 PM
This is a beautiful picture .....and your words echoed the serenity on her face

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 12/22/2008 12:49 AM
Aahhh, Maria, when a picture inspires a mood, a time.....
 
it is not of present mind, just what I felt the face gave me in words, but thank you, Sweet Lady, Zy x

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 12/22/2008 12:51 AM
Thanks, Jen, it is a picture I have loved since I first found it, and...if enlarged,
 
one can loose time just finding so much within the composite surrounding the peaceful dreamer, Zy x

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From: MSN NicknameMerlin--_--_Sent: 12/23/2008 3:58 PM
I really liked the rhyme scheme you used in this wistfull pen, Zy. It flows in harmony with the tranquil picture. (Which in a way reminds me of a "faerie" painting (can't remember who by) in the kelvingrove art gallery - so many small details that are not obvious on first glance)
 
Gordon

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 12/24/2008 11:37 PM
Pleased you enjoyed this older write, Gordon, it is one of my favs;
 
it's a long, long time since I visited there, but I do remember even way back then, they had a gallery I'd get lost in for hours, bit like this picture, Zy

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