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| From: kayano8 (Original Message) | Sent: 12/21/2008 2:05 AM |
As you look at me I turn away, so intense are your eyes that, you leave me shy and I am .. a young woman again, tasting your mouth for the first time, fresh and new. But I am more, much more. Take my breath. I offer it willingly. Watch me smile. And with each kiss, let me sink, a little deeper. |
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It was totally sensuous...loved it...I wish to feel what you speak of someday. Mariaxx |
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A floating, dreamy feel to this .....and sensuous, as Maria says Jen x |
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Meltingly intimate, Stella! The formatting suits this - the poem floats down the page. In the ending, I sensed deeper waters - but couldn't justify that! Gordon |
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It doesn't matter how old we get, we still can feel a teenager - the wonderful element of surprising love - it will always enchant - I love this - beautiful for christmas, beautiful for anytime of year
Emma x |
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