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New Poetry Pge 5 : The eye of a fox
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From: MSN Nicknameelizabeth-armstrong  (Original Message)Sent: 10/20/2006 8:37 PM
I fall into your arms
as the earth's pulse races,
painting our windowpanes with frost
and the kiss of night.
Sleepless, I smell dreams on your breath,
and glancing out of the window
I notice the trees are alive,
whispering lullabies to calm you,
bending their branches towards us.
 
Outside in the garden I join them,
dancing in a twilight world -
more alive with moonlight
than under that pallid sun
that haunts my waking times.
Distantly I seem to hear
the shriek of eagles
carried on a clear mountain breeze;
whale-song, echoing
through black mysterious deeps;
beneath it all, the solemn
thud of your heart. The trees
 
mimick it, shielding you
from the brunt of the wind
that angrily tangles my hair.
Alone by the river, I hear
the weeping willow crying,
'All is dust. All is dust!'
while the moon dries his tears
with her gentle caress.

In from the busy dusk-world
you sleepily pull me to you
and tomorrow you'll tell me
you savoured the smell
of my night wanderings, lightning-sharp,
like the moon reflected
in the eye of a fox.


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Sent: 10/20/2006 9:18 PM
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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/21/2006 1:08 AM
Hy, Elizabeth, it is nice that you have come back in and we can once again enjoy your work.
 
I like the way you have written the transition from inside to out and then back again, I had the feeling of sleepwalking whilst awake throughout this super piece, a nice rentry to the board, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 10/21/2006 3:32 AM
Stunning and I enjoyed this immensely too!  Glad to have you back!  Zy, I have more fun in here than any of the other groups I belong to lol.

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From: MSN Nicknameelizabeth-armstrongSent: 10/22/2006 6:53 PM
Hi Peggy,
 
Thank you for the welcome back. It's difficult to find time among the concerns of studying but I do miss poetry and my poetry friends and am very glad to be back. I try to only come on when I have time to comment on poems too. Thanks for reading,
 
Elizabeth xxx

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From: MSN Nicknameelizabeth-armstrongSent: 10/22/2006 6:55 PM
Hi Zy,
 
Thank you for reading. Unfortunately I haven't written a lot lately but hopefully will get inspired by all the poems on here! Thanks for letting me back in.
 
Elizabeth xxx

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From: MSN Nicknameelizabeth-armstrongSent: 10/22/2006 6:56 PM
Hi Stella,
 
Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.
 
Elizabeth xxx

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From: MSN Nicknameelizabeth-armstrongSent: 10/22/2006 6:57 PM
Hi Dixie,
 
Thank you for the welcome back. I think it's a great group too!
 
Elizabeth xxx

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From: MSN Nicknameelizabeth-armstrongSent: 10/22/2006 7:00 PM
Hi Peter,
 
Thank you for the lovely message welcoming me back. You are so sweet! I deserve a telling-off for being away so long really. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this - I'm afraid my imaginings are rather more sparse than they used to be though.
 
Elizabeth xxx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/26/2006 1:08 AM
Two lovely commendations for the corner, thanks, Ladies, Zy

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