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| | From:  EvaTS_67 (Original Message) | Sent: 5/1/2004 12:17 AM |
Call of Hearts I called. He answered. Just briefly, we spoke. I asked how he was? He replied; Wonderful! (of course!) I realised I'd missed him and hoped he'd missed me too. Our conversation far too short. I wish it had lasted as long as our thoughts. When disconnected I felt sad for the loss, but also exhilarated by his sweet voice. © Eva T.S. April 2004 |
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 Hi Eva (again).. fancy seeing you here! lol I like this one a lot. The shortness of the lines adds a really good effect to the read of the poem. I think it's just great altogether. Thanks for posting it... lv Fluff. |
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Thank you Zydha! and thank you so much for your two different interpretations - I hadn't thought about it that way. Most of the time I just write a poem trying not too think too much about how it might be interpreted by others - sometimes they just write themselves. So it was really interesting to find out how you saw this one and reading it again I can clearly see what you mean. Thank you! Eva  |
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Hi Eva, I like this a lot. It is sad but there are other feelings in it too, hopefulness and love. It is a good poem, I enjoyed it. Mari |
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Val & Mari, thank you both so very much for your kind comments. I am so glad you liked it, and it is suppose to be a bit sad, but with a bit of hope thrown in as well - the feeling of exhiliration having heard his voice. So thank you! Eva |
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