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New Poems Pge 1 : Love In The Head
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From: LittleBill  (Original Message)Sent: 5/3/2004 8:16 AM
Love In The Head
 
In the morning she said to me,
 
‘I can’t have sex without love -
it feels so empty.�?/SPAN>
 
I thought about this.
 
I thought about roses and diamonds
and bended knees
holding hands in the park
birds and bees
I thought of hot wet kisses
on her mother’s couch
girls I’d known
north and south
and I thought about me -
 
me in the dark with a silent rage
picking the lock on a perfumed cage
ransacking Rome
laying it to waste
and I thought about tears
on a pretty face.
 
In the morning I said to her,
 
‘I can’t have love without sex �?/SPAN>
sorry, but I’ve tried my best.�?/SPAN>
 
She thought about this.
 
She thought about muscles and pain
the sweat and the strain
she thought about money
and a house in Belle Vue,
holidays in France
was this her last chance ?
the mirror confessed it was true
 
and she thought; I can’t be alone
in the dark with my greed.
 
In the morning - we decided - she’d leave.
 
©lb04.


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From: MSN NicknamewildestscarletsunriseSent: 5/3/2004 9:34 PM
Hi LB
I like this poem, I think you have managed well in expressing how a man and a womans needs differ.
for a women it is more to do with emotion, where as we all know where a mans brain is situated. lol.
I thought your other poem 'So this is what it's like?' was good too, but too close to the bone for me.
Mari

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From: MSN NicknameBradeneSent: 5/3/2004 10:07 PM
Mari's quite right this does illustrate pefectly the differences between men and women
you are ace at this kind of thing LB. Excellent. Val xx

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From: LittleBillSent: 5/3/2004 11:54 PM
Hey Mari, it's evolution...I hunt the bear...you cook it...and after we've eaten...I want my pudding.....may I have an espresso with that...?....lol
 
: )lb

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From: LittleBillSent: 5/3/2004 11:56 PM
Thanks Val...it comes from years and years of studying the most illusive creature on this planet...yes...you've guessed it !
 
: )lb

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