Aww that's so sad. but lovely, excellent write Emma Love Val xx

 

 

 

Beautifully metaphoric, Emma, my poems are extremely personal to me and it is not often I say 'I wish I'd written this'... but I do.

 

Your words are full of meaning and I also like the your unusual rhymimg pattern, it does work really well, Zydha

Thanks Everyone for your commentsVal, Mari, Fluff, Zydha

 

I wasn't really aware that the rhyming pattern was unusual as its a style I have used before - but I do like experimenting with different styles. 

 

I did wonder if perhaps it was a bit on the miserable side, so I am very flattered with your comments Zydha - my poetry is very personal to me also - I think to write poetry you have to write from the heart.

 

Emma

 

 

A lovely, wistful poem Emma, I wonder if it would work better with a bit of punctuation...?...but that's just me.... : )lb

Thanks lb

 

I vary with punctuation - I know some people consider it all important, but I feel it should be up to the writer if they deem it necessary to use.

 

Emma