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New Poetry Pge 6 : I will have left this place.
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Message 1 of 11 in Discussion

From:

jimmyjoyce1 (Original Message)

Sent: 10/29/2007 11:36 PM

I will have left this place

I stepped outside onto the patio

of my flat, listening and watching

the River Wey and the night sky

both moving in a dance of harmony.

Reminded me strongly of all

that['s happened to me

over the last ten years.

Total stillness..quietness and

the gentle brush of moving water.

A gossamer thread brushed my head

and I turned and walked back in.

Hung the web across my window.

It trembled from my breath.

A very fine strand ... complex...

and before long, before anyone

will know,

I will have left this place.

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Message 2 of 11 in Discussion

From:

Zydha

Sent: 10/30/2007 1:55 AM

I have enjoyed your words a few times since you posted, Jimmy.

The paradoxal thread between the tenuous web and life itself, so fine a line...

I do wish you would file these wonderful reads in Collective, Jimmy, I'd love to get lost in your work for an hour or so as I have just done with Stella's, Zy

Message 3 of 11 in Discussion

From:

1oldarmybear

Sent: 10/30/2007 2:19 AM

An exceptional vignette, JJ... bear

Message 4 of 11 in Discussion

From:

bunnsosoft

Sent: 10/30/2007 7:32 AM

How strangely deep and mysterious it seems, when you write of your musings...I would like to dig deep into your being and see you clearly as you see yourself.

Maria

Message 5 of 11 in Discussion

From:

Cara_inSpirit

Sent: 10/30/2007 10:15 AM

Message 6 of 11 in Discussion

From:

jimmyjoyce1

Sent: 10/30/2007 11:19 PM

Zy...you pick up so well what I am trying to intimate its almost scary. There's a lot banging on here at the moment and I hope it all gets sorted soon...best wishes from jj

Message 7 of 11 in Discussion

From:

jimmyjoyce1

Sent: 10/30/2007 11:21 PM

Thanks Bear... glad that was ok! ... take care now.. from jj

Message 8 of 11 in Discussion

From:

jimmyjoyce1

Sent: 10/30/2007 11:27 PM

Hello Maria..thanks for your kind reply. You strike a right note about what I write which I don't at times understand myself. I just feel outwards and attempt somewhat clumsily to just express how the world and my life and emotions can possibly meld.....I can write a load of crap at times and at others I will be reduced to tears because I cant express what I want to say.. but we have to keep on trying....take care now from ..

Message 9 of 11 in Discussion

From:

jimmyjoyce1

Sent: 10/30/2007 11:29 PM

I love your replies !!!!!!!!! from jj

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Message 10 of 11 in Discussion

From:

Zydha

Sent: 10/30/2007 11:43 PM

We love your work!!!