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Love & Romance : My Poem of Love
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(5 recommendations so far) Message 1 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknameiampooh2  (Original Message)Sent: 4/1/2005 9:48 PM
My Poem of Love 
You brought her to us
not knowing that
I would be the right
and she the left.
 
We were two halves
yet we were whole
but when brought together
we equaled one soul.
 
A perfect fit that
makes us complete
together as one we
bow at you feet.
 
Thank you our
Master and Love
for fulfilling our need,
"one sould uniquily complete."
 
Pauline Ann (pooh) DeCou
3-31-05


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 Message 2 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameWizeMuseSent: 4/1/2005 10:52 PM
Hi Pooh This is beautiful. Really lovely.
You had one little typo there
"one soul uniquely complete" is that right?
Hugs
Dale

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 Message 3 of 9 in Discussion 
From: AnitaSent: 4/2/2005 12:13 AM
Hi Pooh,
This is a beautiful poem. We are glad to have you with us! Welcome!
Anita

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 Message 4 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 4/2/2005 1:30 AM
Pooh,
 
This is a very beautiful poem!  Those fortunate enough to find the other half of their soul are uniquely blessed.
 
I loved the painting you used, it reminds me very much of those by Josephine Wall.  Is it one of hers?  It fit so well to your words.
 
Hugsssssssss
Sassy *S*
 
PS - I'm glad the instructions I posted helped you post this lovely poem! *S*   

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 Message 5 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknameiampooh2Sent: 4/2/2005 3:35 PM
Yes it was a typo and Dale did get it right... Yes it is a Josephine Wall I love her stuff... I have many of her art works hanging in my home... Thank you so very much for the compliments you made my day... it meant so very much to me...
hugs, pooh

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 Message 6 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknameiampooh2Sent: 4/3/2005 3:25 AM
Yes you're right so how do we fix it or can we... (?)  Oh well it was my first try maybe next time will be better... again thank you everyone... hugs, pooh

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 Message 7 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameSassy_CattSent: 4/3/2005 7:14 AM
Pooh,
 
I'm not sure who you are addressing in your message #6, but we can't edit the poems once they are posted, the only thing we can do is to add a message to the thread with the poem redone if you wish, but I don't think it's necessarily needed, unless you yourself want a corrected copy of it.
 
Hope this helps
 
Hugsssssss
Sassy *S*

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 Message 8 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MindySent: 4/12/2005 9:25 PM
Hi Pooh,
 
I am sorry that it has taken a while to welcome you, but so glad to make your aquaintance through such a charming poem.  Your talent is evident and I hope to see more. 
 
p.s.  Love your graphic! 
 
Mindy  :-)

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 Message 9 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamemariemusesSent: 7/11/2005 9:27 PM
fantastic write. this was incredibly romantic.

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