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New Poems Pge 1 : Night Time Nonsense
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 4/28/2004 12:28 AM
Let's tiptoe 'cross a moonbeam
Slide down the other side.
We can swim the Milky Way
So vast and spreading wide.
 
Who says we can't be sparkles
To brighten up the night.
And fly along with shooting stars
Till we are out of sight.
 
Why must I be earthbound
When I don't have a care.
Tonight my head is in the clouds
With feet up in the air
 
I just wanted to write something!!!
  


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From: LittleBillSent: 4/28/2004 6:01 AM
...cool Zed, as it happens....I just wanted to READ something...thanks.... : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/28/2004 7:38 AM
hahahaha....I had spent ages trying something for the challenges and tore so many pages out of my pad, that I wanted to complete something last night!!! 
 
So...Hey Man...Gimme five! lol.YWC....Zed. heehee

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/28/2004 8:14 AM
Hi Zydha
 
A wonderful vignette of verse, totally enjoyable.  I loved the ending "with feet up in the air"  it painted a delightful picture.
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/28/2004 10:33 AM
Thanks Emma, you will get used to me...I scribble into frustration and then just go off somewhere in an easy vent to writer's block, not that it has helped any, lol, but I am still trying. 'Feet' up in the air was a metaphor for 'hands', when stuck, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameBradeneSent: 4/28/2004 3:23 PM
What is there to say. Except.. DELIGHTFUL!! love Val xx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/28/2004 9:35 PM
Just a moment out, Val, thanks, luv, Zy x

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From: MSN NicknameGretathepoet1Sent: 4/28/2004 9:59 PM
A charming poem, I liked it very much,

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaArtSent: 4/28/2004 10:22 PM
Hy Greta, lol, this is a little thing I typed out late last night in about ten minutes and the one below I sat with my head in my hands on and off for ages, hahaha....think I shall write from 12.30 am till 12.45 am!
 
Glad you like it, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 4/29/2004 11:10 AM
Some times the nonsense works like this does!
Mindman

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/30/2004 12:12 AM
Thanks, Mark, I always find it easier to fly off in the clouds (hypothetically, of course) than keep both feet, lol, Zydha 

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From: MSN NicknameBouncing-FluffSent: 5/1/2004 11:08 PM
 
 
hehe, great poem this is Zy... love it!! I'd love to swim the milky way.. but i cant swim, seeing as you offered to hold steve's hand, can you teach me to swim as well? (I can swim a bit, but i'm scared of water! lol.. i think swimming in stars might be a bit different though?)

Thanks for posting!!!! Lv Fluff.

(So glad that i have Fluff as my nickname..haha! and not *cough cough* Zexy!) hahaha!


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/1/2004 11:33 PM
hahaha...I could wring Steves neck...it is going to stick!!!
 
Just a bit of night time scribbles, Fluff, I always find it easier to write of moonbeams and clouds when dried up and it helps to loosen up the inspiration. Just couldn't come up with anything for Max's challenge and aftre this one 3 came with ease. The only thing with the challenge is they go out so quickly that they need refinements after.
 
Close your eyes, Fluff, anyone can go there, luv, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameEvaTS_67Sent: 5/7/2004 10:19 PM
I love this Zydha!!
So wonderfully dreamy and with a childlike innocence of believing anything is possible. I'm so glad you just wanted to write something!
Eva

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 5/8/2004 6:47 AM
Thanks Eva, one of my ploys when stuck for words is to escape into the wide blue yonder. I was completely dried up on both challenges and if I go where I love to play with words it seems to always work and 'did' this time as usual. lol
 
So now you know, when you read something of this type of light tiptoeing through the land of dreams....I'm stuck and for words!!! lol. Love your interpretation, Zydha

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