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| From:  makhala334 (Original Message) | Sent: 10/16/2006 3:17 AM |
brrrrrrrrrrrrr
the candles fade to ghostly haze - ssssssssch
sweet fare askew across the stage
we played upon - past afters phase
in our want of wants �?mmm’nature’s craze
the beat
drawn to tub we bubbled there - blup
amid fumbling hand and kissing care
luscious lips �?wanton drips - ssssssssss
steaming breath - plunging hips
the heat
the moon turn down �?the swoon go up
kiss you there my buttercup?
tickle me you silly boy
treat me as your soapy toy
ooooo my sweet �?slip from me
i can’t get hold my ecstasy
my rubber duck it’s nearly stuck
don’t take her ‘way from me
oo-oooo
she jump all ‘round
that silly girl
like a slippery soap in tilt-a-whirl
can’t we stop �?i’m wet as sop
agh
the moment’s lost �?i’m upside down
there’s soap and bubbly all ‘round
oh please my sweet �?i’ll dry you feet?!
call me if you’re back in town??
brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
best,
m
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 10/16/2006 7:39 AM |
lol...what a lovely start to the day, Mikhail, we don't see this humourous side of you very often and it's wonderful. I chuckled as this one ended, lol....even 'bath-time' is more fun with you, Zy |
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thanks Zy - i fancied a steamy one - but then - it all sounded silly as i went on rubber ducky and all lol, m |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 10/16/2006 9:02 PM |
lol...I wouldn't mind a sequel either, Stella. Hear us, Mikhail, ??? |
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LOLHAHAHAHEHEHEHOHOHO! I am still laughing. My neighbors must think I'm nuts! Well of course I am in a good way tho! Love the humor, and was the sensuality with a woman or the duck? Please continue..... |
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thank yoiu Stella
ah - what happens next is the mystery - anything can happen that the reader can imagine
thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this work Stella,
mikhail |
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yeah Zy - don't ban Stella - please,
m |
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i ended up chuckling at this one as well Dixie
only your imagination can define which it is - the dear lady - or the dear ducky - or - - - - - - - - both - YEOW!
thanks for reading and thaking the tiem to comment on this work,
mikhail |
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Yes sequel please!!! And where have you been the past couple days? When there is nothing for a day from you I worry. |
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