As always, you echo the graphic with your words, Maria, but I like how you also echo the words of Li Bai...autumn can be such a season of optimisn and you capture that well.

 

But I wasn't certain if the spasmodic rhyming pattern was deliberate, or coincidental and if this was to be read as free verse, Maria, (as I often find I speak a short statement in rhyme to everyone's amusement) but it threw me a little as I read, just wondering, Zy 

an interesting perspective... bewar

Hy Zy, I wrote as I saw fit, it was done unconsciously, thank you for your fine review, it is wonderful and so kind...thank you for making poetry for me ... beautiful.

 

Hugs,

 

Maria

Thank you Bear, for your kind review.

 

Maria

beautiful graphic and poem!  love Autumn.

Thank you Cara and Dix...so nice of you to respond.

 

Maria

I think you captured the spirit of the season as intended in a simple style that made the reder feel part of your vision.

mark

this is great Maria and the picture is simply delicious

 

Lai Bai was also known as Li Po...I love the romantic in his verse, I feel his ways...Thank you for your insightfulness, your kind words of review...

Kind regards,

 

Maria

Thank you Mindmanuk ... I fell in love with the art and Lai Bai's poem...the rest followed...your response was most kind.

 

Maria

Thank you Kayo...isn't the picture perfect for the season? I loved it...thought I would share it...I was so inspired.

 

Maria

Dear Peter,

 

No, I am not quite that talented. I was fortunate enough to attain the art from another poet friend who wished to inspire me in the midst of my writer's block...she has much faith in me, bless her anyway...Thank you for your response, you mad me smile...

 

Maria xx