ar.ar..HOOOWWWWL!
it's all about breath
we all do it, breathe that is, and it's our breath which gives us
pause
the rhythm of your blood pumping through your brain
it's all in alliteration, when it's not forced or even thought about
in this pause, i've reflected back at me
not a suicide note
not a suicide at all
more like a weary man just laying down his head
in the desert night
after an exhausting drenching drowning lifetime of days
©dlc 6/13/2006
seven by threes
albrecht durer castles steps
gothic passageways
gargoyled paths pathos
dreaming. i know i am
very lucid dreams i follow
finding
crumbs
along
the
way
way
down
i find
illusions
sparkling waves. elusive
mist mirrors. no reflection
durer's fortress. staid
dali daVinci warhol
ah! picasso w/a twist!
i dont know where this is going here
just as when i sleep
comatose-electric-rems
and then i gotta pee.
©dlc june 10 onto 11, 2006
post script
obsessive meanderings
counting over & over
reading the line
breaks differently
but i always went back to how i wrote it first
seeing patterns alliterative pairings
they march the paper in groupings
triptich in nature
uncovering by threes, seven times.
from word four
line six seven eight nine ten
counting syllables
not trying to make it fit...
noticing that it does
my breath songs know how to sing
© dlc 12 june, 2006