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From: MSN NicknameStandardArtifact2Sent: 10/25/2006 10:32 PM
Well it looks like the html showed up in both formats.
What do i do now?
 
I wrote the piece in outlook express. Copyied it to W0rd so I could save it to my writings.  Then I  made the corrections and re-copy pasted it back to the site and low...htmal all over the place. ..Grrr.
 
I bet my copy save to my drafts in Outlook expresss will have it too. Lets see.
 

A Halloween Love story ………�?by unruly orange<o:p></o:p>

 

As Jacque lay in her bed staring at the sculpted ceiling she thought about John.  She and John had been sweethearts for five years and even though he was with a new girl now, the old feelings hung on.  As luck would have it the couple lived just next door in the same apartment complex.  It was sometimes hard to lay with only a wall between their apartments and hear the sweet laughter just behind the barrier.  <o:p></o:p>

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Jacque twiddled her hair and realized that she was still a bit angry that he was such a cheater and had caused the split up. She felt a surge as she blamed him for the lost of all that had been before.  Now it was just the way it was, and the new girl friend was really sweet and also a dear friend. Case closed.

 

She could hear John and several of his buddies as they drank their beer and goofed around in the drive. They were loading up an old motorcycle to take to Gaffer City.  Carla, John's girlfriend and her dog were busy in a training session which included eating the seat from one poor slob's baggie pants. The seven guy wonders of the world climbed aboard the truck and took off with a jerk and screech. This day seemed just like all the others and a party was planned for that evening when the merchants returned with their capital gains.

 

Jacque had been feeling strangely ill all day and chose to go to sleep for a while. Something in her stomach felt queasy and out of sync. She had not been napping long when she was awakened with the feeling of someone in her room.  With sleepy eyes she looked around and saw no one, so she drifted away again. 

 

Again she woke as she felt the mattress shift with the weight of something on her bed.  She felt very tired and pushed it away thinking it was her old cat. She could smell John’s familiar scent that made her take a deep breath. Opening her eyes she saw nothing and soon drifted back into slumber.

 

Only seconds later she felt a body with cudgeling arms laying next to her.  With a single breath she immediately recognized the intruder as John.  She was surprised at first and then a bit angry.  What was he doing in her room?

 

He felt wet as though he had just slipped in from the shower and she wondered just what he was trying to pull. Her resistance was weak at best and she was trying not to feel guilty when she heard his whispering voice telling her he loved her and not to worry.  In the stillness she selfishly clung to deep emotions as he promised his love till the ends of the earth. Deep inside she wanted to keep silent forever, thinking perhaps he would stay, even though she knew this cheep trick could not work out. What about Carla?

 

Knowing what he was doing was wrong, she held still for a longing moment taking in all the love she so wanted to be hers.  At just the moment she had decided to give into her desires and fully embrace him, she felt him pull away leaving only the wet spot where he had laid.  She could not bring herself to look his way so she kept her eyes closed tight and asked him to leave the room before they both regretted this stupid moment. With out another word he was gone.

 

The next time Jacque opened her eyes the room was filled with total blackness and the sound of a wildly ringing phone. She rolled over knocking it to the floor and as she leaned down to pick it up she could hear a screaming, crying voice on the other end.  In a foggy daze she lifted the receiver to her ear. 

 

"Oh my God Jacque, help me, he is dead. They are all hurt and dieing. Mickey wrecked the truck and John went through a barbed wire fence. It cut him almost in half.  I was at my sisters house when they came for me." Carla's voice broke into sobbing sadness as she said, " I missed his last moments."  

 

Jacque sat frozen in shock and bewilderment. She wanted to scream, "no you’re lying" but she let the phone hang loosely in her hand as she touched the still wet sheets.  Emotions of love and fear swirled and tangled inside her mind. How could she have been with John only moments before if he had been dieing in the hospital?  

 

Had their love bridged the great gap of time and space, if only for the departing moment?   >0<

 

 

 

 

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From: MSN NicknameStandardArtifact2Sent: 10/25/2006 10:43 PM
Fixed the Cuddling ...not clubed.

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From: MSN Nicknameswitchgears1_Sent: 10/27/2006 3:11 PM
Great story Orange. I like tales of the unexplained. Pulled it over to the menu to put in your book. I may change the illustration. Write some more. You have a natural talent for expression. I wouldn't tell you that, just to make you feel good. (I have other ways.   LOL)
 
Maybe it is because your mind sees things thru the eyes of an artist, that you can lay out your story so neatly. One problem that writers sometimes have is getting the events to flow in sequence. You did a really good job.
 
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From: MSN NicknameStandardArtifact2Sent: 10/28/2006 9:46 PM
 Oh ahh aha such sweet talk.  Dr Feelgood for sure.  It will take me just a couple of breaths to think stright.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
ok just one more moment. lol
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ok..now
 
I am glad you liked my story. And surprised you had time to deal with it.
 
Please fix anything that needs fixing..those little html blinkies would be nice gone. Not the >O< symbole though. 
That is another statement. A quantum thing.
Thank you so much for putting it in my book. That book is such a kewl idea.
 
 
I just used that image to  fill the spot.  I can't think of anything that I have made that world fit that story.  That would be a hard one to approch.
 
Could that cover image be changed later if I find something? I wish I had more time for this.  No matter I will later.
 
I must go to go shovel some more dirt. I will be back in a couple of hours.
 
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From: MSN Nicknameswitchgears1_Sent: 11/1/2006 7:09 PM
 
will do more to it when I get a minute.

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From: MSN Nicknameswitchgears1_Sent: 11/6/2006 8:14 AM
It's on a web page and I can change anything at anytime.(anything for you, sweetpea)

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From: MSN NicknameStandardArtifact2Sent: 11/21/2006 6:39 PM

 

Switch, This is my old Haunted House. It is posted to album at the main site.

Very nice job on the show set up.  Sure are some  interesting works. I think will give PSP another look and see if I can make any flashy stuff. I know it would be fun once I learn how. It is just so hard to learn all these programs by trial and error.   I don't know if I even have the manual to that program. 

When I was looking at that show i thought how fun it would be to write a little caption story between the frames.

Orange

 


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