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I walked out one crystal night and the air was cold and black every star held bright and true against it's midnight back The moon hung low above the trees as silent as a ghost and I sat there in the fields as frigid as a post This night was so gorgeous just like a movie scene and even the trees kept still to keep my view pristine My mind began to wonder through thoughts about this place It wished to share with someone nature's purest face But around me there was not a soul not a heart to make a sound and I knew I was all alone when I began to look around Then my heart felt empty like the space between the stars I knew the night alone couldn't heal all my scars So with that I began to walking back into the night i knew that I would need someone to help me win this fight So now I must leave this scene until some other time Because until I can share it it's just a song without a rhyme ~Rav |
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wow... that's a beautiful poem. And i guess so many ppl can relate to that. :) well done. though when feeling alone like this, we never truely are. for the stars are there, and there may not be people, though there are always other things if we know where to look. nice to meet you rav! blessed be and take care charly |
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Thats beautiful!! Did you write it?? Very nice! thanks for sharing |
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Beautiful Ravyn, ty for sharing . |
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This is a beautiful poem. But I must agree with Mystic Charly we are never truly alone as we are all part of the universe, one with everything and everyone. Thus we can never be alone unless we chose to be. |
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Yes I definately agree, we truly are never alone. But poetry is a matter of feeling. and I was feeling rather lonely when I wrote it, but I am pleased that you all liked it. Thank you. ~Rav |
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